" do kind of wish we'd gotten a little bit more of what it was like between Mel and Jared before Wanda though. he wasn't the most sympathetic of characters" I totally agree.
The only thing that made me think of Twilight when reading this is that every now and then Jared or Ian's "voice" would remind me Edward.
I was hooked from the beginning but for some reason at the end I felt like something was missing. I could never quite put my finger on it. Maybe just that everyone ended up happily ever after.
I did think it was a brilliant story idea and well handled. Very interesting ideas.
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Date: 2008-08-29 08:22 pm (UTC)I totally agree.
The only thing that made me think of Twilight when reading this is that every now and then Jared or Ian's "voice" would remind me Edward.
I was hooked from the beginning but for some reason at the end I felt like something was missing. I could never quite put my finger on it. Maybe just that everyone ended up happily ever after.
I did think it was a brilliant story idea and well handled. Very interesting ideas.